Post by {K}itsune on Feb 9, 2008 18:13:36 GMT -5
Well, this is my first review, so yeah. Anyways, Chelsea, I love your story. I think it is amazing, but of course, I have a few things to say: Critique like things. Basically, I thought that it was a little confusing to follow at times, like during the pool fight. Along with that, I was just a little confused with how fast Nicholas liked her, it just confused me. It was odd because you had moved through to them liking each other so fast. I believe that was it. Other than that though, I really like it so far, don't stop now! ^^
