The Vanguard Ch. 1 (Review)

[Despair]

Really awesome work, Caim. Though I think that the characters (Avery and then Harabec and Victor) may have met a bit too quickly, it was well-written with lots of personality! Victor's seems so easy-going about everything, and then Harabec's like this total jerk sometimes, lmao...love itttt! The Avery introduction was nicely done and descriptive, too. Can't wait for chapter two!

[Caimvarin]

thanks
The meeting with Azel is not the concrete meeting....it is quite the unfortunate meeting lol, as you will see in chapter 2 XD

the characters have always been fun to write with but this is the first proper story i've done with them (rather than them just cameo in my friends stories)
glad you like it!